导语：奥数网给同学们汇总了小学英语作文范文及点评，希望同学们的英语学习有所帮助。以下为范文原文：

　　My grandma always tells me that the sunrise and the sunset in my hometown is very beautiful. But I see them all the time, so I don’t learn to appreciate their charm. One day, when I walked on the country road, I looked at the sky and found the red cloud , a big sun is buring, it is such beautiful. For the first, I see the beauty of sunset.

　　奶奶总是告诉我,家乡的日出和日落事非常漂亮的。但是我总能看到,所以我不会欣赏它们的魅力。一天,当我走在乡间小路,我看了看天空,发现红色的云,太阳在燃烧,它是如此的美丽。第一次,我看到美丽的日落。